第三届上邦国际摄影俱乐部年赛5月10日参赛作品选登

原句：

"The sun was setting, casting a golden glow over the city. People hurried home, their shadows long and thin on the pavement. The air was cool, a welcome change from the day's heat."

改写润色：

"As the sun dipped below the horizon, it bathed the city in a warm, golden light. The denizens of the metropolis hastened towards their abodes, their elongated silhouettes dancing upon the concrete canvas. The evening breeze, a refreshing contrast to the day's sweltering embrace, whispered through the streets."

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